Unit 15: Task 1 | Pie chart, table
I. Cấu trúc
1. Pie chart:
The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
Sample:
Introduction: Paraphrase đề bài
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The two charts illustrate the proportion of five types of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005. |
Overview: Nêu ra đặc điểm/xu hướng nổi bật nhất trong 2 câu. Lưu ý, không đưa số liệu cụ thể trong đoạn này.
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Overall, in both years, the most significant sources of energy were gas and coal, which together accounted for over half the production of energy, while nuclear and other kinds of energy sources generated the least amount of energy in France. In all types of energy production there was only minimal change over the 10 year period. |
Body paragraph 1: Miêu tả chi tiết
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Energy produced by coal comprised of 29.80% in the first year and this showed only a very slight increase of about a mere 1 % to 30.9% in 2005. Likewise, in 1995, gas generated 29.63% which rose marginally to 30.1 years later. |
Body paragraph 2: Miêu tả chi tiết
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With regards to the remaining methods of producing energy, there was an approximate 5% growth in production from both nuclear power and other sources to 10.10% and 9.10% respectively. Petrol, on the other hand, was the only source of energy which decreased in production from 29.27% in 1995 to around a fifth (19.55%) in 2005. |
2. Table
The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009.
Sample:
Introduction: Paraphrase đề bài
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The table illustrates the percentage of school children attending different types of secondary school from 2000 to 2009. |
Overview: Nêu ra đặc điểm/xu hướng nổi bật nhất trong 2 câu. Lưu ý, không đưa số liệu cụ thể trong đoạn này.
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It is evident that whereas the community schools experienced a marked increase in the proportion of those attending their institutions over the period, the others saw a corresponding decline. |
Body paragraph 1: Nhóm những đối tượng có xu hướng thay đổi giống nhau
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To begin, the percentage of pupils in voluntary-controlled schools fell from just over half to only 20% or one fifth from 2000 to 2009. Similarly, the relative number of children in grammar schools -- just under one quarter -- dropped by half in the same period. As for the specialist schools, the relatively small percentage of pupils attending this type of school (12%) also fell, although not significantly. |
Body paragraph 2: Miêu tả đối tượng có xu hướng thay đổi ngược lại
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However, while the other three types of school declined in importance, the opposite was true in the case of community schools. In fact, while only a small minority of 12% were educated in these schools in 2000, this figure increased to well over half of all pupils during the following nine years. |
Ngữ pháp và Từ vựng
1. X chiếm tỉ lệ n%:
accounted for = comprised of = represented
2. X có sự thay đổi nhỏ:
There was a minimal change in X
3. X tăng không đáng kể
X rose marginally
4. X tăng 5%
There was a 5% growth in X
5. X trải qua sự gia tăng đáng kể
X experienced a marked increase
6. X chứng kiến sự giảm tương tự (sử dụng khi đã nhắc đến những đối tượng khác có cùng xu hướng thay đổi ở trước)
X saw/witnessed a corresponding decline
7. X giảm một nửa
X dropped by half
8. X tăng đến hơn một nửa
X increased to well over half
Luyện tập
Bài 1: Viết lại 2 câu dưới đây dựa vào từ gợi ý. Lưu ý, có thể thay đổi dạng từ
The number of cars in Hanoi increased significantly from 2005 to 2015.
EXPERIENCE
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WITNESS
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RISE
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The percentage of high schoolers studying abroad after graduating was under 20% in 2018.
ACCOUNT
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COMPRISE
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REPRESENT
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Bài 2: Viết bài IELTS Writing Task 1
The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016.
Keys
Bài 1:
Bài 2:
The pie charts show the amount of revenue and expenditures in 2016 for a children’s charity in the USA. Overall, it can be seen that donated food accounted for the majority of the income, while program services accounted for the most expenditure. Total revenue sources just exceeded outgoings.
In detail, donated food provided most of the revenue for the charity, at 86%. Similarly, with regard to expenditures, one category, program services, accounted for nearly all of the outgoings, at 95.8%.
The other categories were much smaller. Community contributions, which were the second largest revenue source, brought in 10.4% of overall income, and this was followed by program revenue, at 2.2%. Investment income, government grants, and other income were very small sources of revenue, accounting for only 0.8% combined.
There were only two other expenditure items, fundraising and management and general, accounting for 2.6% and 1.6% respectively. The total amount of income was $53,561,580, which was just enough to cover the expenditures of $53,224,896.